Jenni Brannan
1 min readDec 2, 2017

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I am really enjoying your writing, your willingness to share your journey, the lows and the highs. I admire your work to educate and elevate men, it is obviously needed. The vulnerability you are willing to share gives you a unique platform; I’m looking forward to your book.

I would like to offer something to consider, understanding writers need a “hook” in each title. I am echoing another response here. You might consider avoiding words that have misogynistic roots. I’m thinking of “douche” and “bitch” in two recent posts.

Maybe you’re not writing to or for me, or somewhat enlightened men. There is a huge, wide audience out there. If that’s the case, maybe those titles attract the very demographic you’re going for, and such titles reel them in and get them in touch with your material. If that’s the case, I’ll be interested to hear whether you achieve your goal.

I ask you to consider your word choice and the impact of those words on your readers.

Looking forward to more of your stuff.

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Jenni Brannan
Jenni Brannan

Written by Jenni Brannan

Writing to peel back the layers, expose the juicy middle and maybe find something unexpected.

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